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short and to the point lol
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A beautiful poem expressing your deep emotions. You create some very sensual and vivid images.
Love & Hugs,
Ethereal One
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You are roaming in the thoughts of wonderful love and touching the arena of true love with a message to celebrate it as well.well done my friend....
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Woah...very, very emotional writing, and incredible description in the third stanza.
I thought at first I wouldn't like this for some odd reason, but it's quite beautiful And it's the first time I've read a free verse poem and havne't actually NOTICED the lack of rhyme because it flows so effortlessly. It's awesome -
Bravo...
Pure Loveliness..
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A beautifuly tender poem you have writen fo my contest
entries like this one ar goin to make it very hard to judge a winner. beautifuly written and a pleasure to read.
good luck in teh contest
jan ♥
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I have read your poetry for a very long time and each poem is very special and moving, but this peace, has a heart and soul, with each passing line you could feel the beauty that it holds.
The imagery you created within your poem really makes it come alive within ones mind as they read it.
It really is a breath taking poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest..
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Enchanting Imagery
I especially enjoyed the thematic images of breath and wind extended into movement with quiver, whispers and caress.
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