I will rest in the safety
of your embrace until I can
feel it no longer.
Yet, over it wont be,
all that’s required is
a closing of eyes and
your mine once again.
My adoration grows more each new day.
I will love you until angels come and for me
are calling.
Author notes
I will love you until I can love no more
--10 lines
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/10/30 by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 27, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love this poem i feel the feelings of this write.. i will love my matt until the day of my death and then on after!! great write!!! keep penning sweetheart
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So Precious
Oh to love in such a deep and beautiful way. This is committment and to be able to close your eyes and still feel his loving embrace. Beautiful poem as always sweet one. Congradulations on the silver!!
Your Aunty
Kelle Marie
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Thanks Aunty Kelle
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congrats on silver sis
i love you this was great -
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Thanks SiS
Lov Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Aww that's beautiful sis!! What a picture of devotion and love you have penned! Congrats on the silver!
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Heheheh thanx sis, naturally this one came pretty easy hehe
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That's a beautiful love.
Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks I like to think it is too hehehe
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beautiful poem, this makes me happy all over. I think i have butterflies. Great work and thanks for entering.
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oh wow thank you so much..I love speaking my words of love for my man thorugh poems and even prompts
so thank you, honoured to win silver
Cindy
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Awww this is so beautiful!! Its brings tears to me eyes, maybe thats just cause i miss my BF lol. But its just amazing, and so powerful. I love it!! x
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Awwwwww
thanx Darl
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best of luck in the contest
SMILEY FOR PRESIDENT =] -
Yaaaaaaaaay!!! Happy to see you here!!! Best wishes
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Thanx
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