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A Soul's Awakening





Mesmerized by unyielding beauty,
whispering winds beckon senses
to journey beyond essence

below indigo moods,
pasted with marshmallow dreams
in anticipation of tomorrow’s horizon;
starlight’s gazing eyes,
cast upon the moon’s coy grin

as mountains below trickle tears
into rippling reflections
of yesterday

awakening sweet songs
with every
miraculous sunrise~



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Prompt: Just give me 50 words
of love for planet...
picture: www.rockymtnrefl.com/lostlake.jpg

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  • poppa
    May 31, 2008
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    Beautiful picture matched by your beautiful words....


  • Confusedboy
    May 30, 2008

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    how sweet it is! melody of mountains, dressed with greenery, taking breath away, silently, a song plays its tune inside our mind and soul. we find contentment, without words. only inner emotions play the heart filling melody of sweetness and love.wonderful expressions you have penned.


  • kaibab silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    This is lovely indeed...and I am such a lucky one to live in such a poem...thank you so much for this amazing contribution


  • moonbumps silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    Marshmallow dreams I could handle!(you know me!)
    Seriously-this is truly captivating free write-very good luck with htis babes-
    xxx Love Hilly xxx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Sigh.. oh so pretty!! I just love the softness of this and the feeling of beauty awakening!


  • PerfectImperfection
    May 28, 2008

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    Oh wow.... Such a very soothing piece of true and utter BEAUTY! You gave this image 'life' - far beyond just simple words. Wonderful use of imagery to paint such a journey. Excellent piece!!!


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Beautiful poem to match the breathtaking view in your pic.....Your poem expresses the beauty of nature in all it's splendor....

    Great entry!



    Lynda

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