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Curves of Devotion

 

While fingertips

stroke deep within

feminine form...

 

lips of devotion

apply coats of

moist hue

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: "Brushed Curves"
15 words

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Weltt gold member
    June 4

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    Steamy and seductive in so few words. grats on the silver for the stunningly sensual write!!


  • penman gold member
    June 1
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    Excellent

    Very well done. Such a great take on the prompt. Congratulations on the silver.

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 1

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    ooh you're good at these lil hot hot ones
    well done on the shiney

    Tasha


  • Ravensdark
    May 31

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    The words lead my mind to pleasent flights of fancy, most of which would be considered improper....well written....I enjoyed reading this poem....


  • Valley Girl gold member
    May 31

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    Awesome hun! Another fantastic sensual write! Great imagery in this as well! Congrats on the Silver. ♥


  • SuicidalLover gold member
    May 31

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    Hehehe....congrats on you silver. This paints a few pictures in so little words. A great poem sis.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 31

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    ohhh nice, nice imagery..great work with the prompt sis...YaY for silver heheh


    Cin


  • The Unknown Poet1
    May 30

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    yes very nice indeed! The images these few words "brush" to life fits My vast imagination so very well


  • Mark McNulty
    May 30

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    Very nice. Another strong jab of the pen and quite sensual. Always a treat to read your work, Jacks, and I finally have a bit of free time to do it now!

  • penman gold member
    May 29
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation for the contest. Congratulations on the silver.


  • faderman1959 silver member
    May 28

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    This was delicious! Sensualy that is! For such a short poem, so erotic! I may have to read this a few more times!


  • JohnnyD gold member
    May 28

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    interesting, penned to be tastefully Silver

    congrats



    Len


  • buffsab99 silver member
    May 28

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    Sensual

    Yet again I bow to the queen of sensual. Well done and congrats on silver


  • arafura
    May 28
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    Super sensual... Another gem from your talented pen. Congrats on the trophy!


  • quantumsurveyor
    May 28

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    A very "slick" piece of work.. Well done on the trophy, it will surely weigh down your mantleshelf LOL.


  • PerfectImperfection
    May 28

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    Such a great take on the prompt here. Wonderful play on words. You amaze me with these quickies!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 28

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    Congrats on the silver!

    Wow this is fab! I love the direction you took, it all melts together seamlessly. Superbly done hunni, gold IMHO but alas, I wasn't the judge. Congrats on the silver


  • SweetXDestiny silver member
    May 28
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    congrats on silver auntie
    i love you

  • Mat Larkin
    May 28

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    Great...

    Perfect title captured my attention. The piece had me smiling at the thought...

    Well done work and well-deserved on the trophy.

    Mat


  • Pure Thought silver member
    May 27
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    Sweet sensual silver.


  • Lucy. gold member
    May 27
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    Very sensual write! Well done on the silver.


  • perfectsunset
    May 27

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    Wow this was so gorgeous sis! I love the beauty within and passion in your words. Amazing take on the prompt & congrats on the silver!

  • Cerulean gold member
    May 27
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  • Leila Greeters member
    May 27

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    Oooooooooo get you! Great as always! This flows really well. Excellent take on the prompt too. Love it sis =] x

  • solo wisp gold member
    May 27

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    yep yep yep ... sensual is thy name. heh

    wonderful stroke of ... brush.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 27

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    ooooh... "moist hue"... love that .
    Nice take here Love it.
    Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • Cerulean gold member
    May 27
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    I really liked this one.
    You could flip these stanzas if you wanted to.


  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    May 27
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    best of luck in the contest. i know you can do it!
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