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open your eyes

 

Open your eyes
and see what you are worth.
That you're more precious that rubies,
more valuable than gold.

When you are no longer blind
and you see what's important,
you'll know life's worth living
even if it doesn't seem that way.

So open your eyes
and know someone loves you.
It may seem like a longshot
but I know this to be true.

Hey beautiful,
let those baby blues help you
see the world in 20/20, with a new pair of lens.
Cherish your days, love every minute.
Your life could be so much better
if you'd just open your eyes.

 

 

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  • Blind2Life
    November 25
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    inspiration

    everyone needs to know this.


  • Brit-Girl
    July 25, 2008

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    I love the punch line of this and think it is a great message! you have expressed the thought perfectly and congrats on the bronze


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  • movedon
    July 25, 2008

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    Once again, you write something that all girls should read. God has blessed you with such compassion and love for others and along with that, an amazing talent to write!!! Lovely work.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    because people are important and they are being thought of =]


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    May 28, 2008
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    you have a way of making people feel important and thought of.

    ♥ Abby


  • Cannonsfire
    May 27, 2008

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    Gosh I must have been squinting again! This is lovely, you have to cherish yourself first before others...but that's ok I like me And I like you for writing this! Love, C


  • Blooming Poet
    May 27, 2008
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    look at finalist list.


  • Blooming Poet
    May 27, 2008

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    I agree. I needed to read this too, sounds like me. Even though I do cherish my days, butt maybe not enough. You should enter this in my PW party contest. I love it.


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 27, 2008

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    Oh my.... You dont know how much I needed to read this.... I know it wasn't written for me...But I needed this... Thank you so much....

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