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Mommy, When I Grow Up

I want to be a drug addict
Feel the needles pierce the skin

I want to be a hooker
Lose a piece of myself with every man

I want to be abused
Cover bruises with heavy makeup

I want to be a hobo
Blisters on my feet and stomach always grumbling

I want to be all those things you told me not to
Just to see what you'd do

Mommy, I want to be what you criticized
Just to see what you'd say

People don't mean to do those things, Mommy
Accidents happen, people make bad choices

I'll never be like them, but sometimes I wish I would
Just to see you eat your words

Author notes

Honestly, no clue where that came from. Just came into my head and started writing itself, basically.

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  • HereComesTheSun
    June 2, 2008
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    ohmygosh fantastic!!!! loved every word of it


  • lesbian-in-love
    May 28, 2008

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    Wow this is good. I really like it. We always want to do what our parents tell us not to just to see how they react. This was well written. You did a very good job. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • elmundopasa1
    May 27, 2008

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    wow. so rebellious. such is the mindset of a teenager. well penned. and almost humorous. great job. haha. well done.


  • Mistress Masquerade
    May 27, 2008

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    Haha, I love this. I have said similar things to my Daddy, that didn't go over so well... Best of luck my friend! I want to be a hooker! JUST KIDDING!