Hush now
The moon is gone
Wake now
Into the bright new dawn
See now
You're not alone
Hear now
The others moan
Cry now
We cry as well
Dry now
The tears
And break the spell
A contest entry
- Make me fly or come with me in the dark by subliminal girl.
400 points, ended May 30, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope you like it...
Comments
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I really REALLY like the lines "Hush now, the moon is gone" it sets up such a nice...tone[?] yes, that is the word I'm looking for. That sentence is like mood lighting.
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Wow, nice take on the prompt! Thanks for entering my contest with this wonderful heartfelt encouraging poem
Beautifully written... Best of luck!
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Oh this is the second poem I saw on your account thing.
It is amazing, though I expect no less...
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Oh wow.This is beautiful!!! I really enjoyed reading this poem. Well taken from the prompt. I didn't like it, I LOVED it!!!! WOO HOO!!
Mylee
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