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When I'm Gone (a love poem)

When I'm gone
will you shed
tears for me?
When I take
my last breath
will you hold yours?

Hold me tightly
to your side,
cause here's
your last chance
to say your sorries
and your good-byies.

When I'm
six feet deep
I pray that
you will relized
that you loved me.
When I lay
with my eyes unopened,
I hope you cry for me
like I did for you.

Kiss me now
for here is
your last chance
to show me that
you cared for me.

When I'm asleep,
I hope you love me
the way I loved you
while I was awake.

Author notes

I hope you feel the way I do behind your hidden eyes.

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