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biography of life---------

She delivered a cool smile
to a hard and hot heart of mine
never i expected that the taste of nectar
rent my feelings in the heaven's space

Her lips relate a history of love
Her eyes relate to me the biography of life

Her emrbace made me warm
and hugs streamed me to ocean of happiness

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I’ve never had the pleasure of looking into his/her eyes or holding his/her in my arms and yet he's/she’s touched me like I’ve never been touched before.

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 19, 2008
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    Beautiful my friend. This left me imagining the scene before me. Soft and serene. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der