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Remember When

Remember when
we were younger
sitting under the stars
together
Now we are older, and wiser
realizing
together isn't forever

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http://demoncherry.deviantart.com/art/Signs-of-Destiny-75824501

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  • penman gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and appropriate for the image. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Aww.. no, together isn't always forever.. a sad but lovely take on the pic


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    May 27, 2008

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    Ohhh, I really like this! I find it incredibly difficult to write short little pieces (entirely too long winded, I guess) but the pic and the poem go together like peanut butter & jelly! Bravo!