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My Heart

Turning
churning
my heart beats fast
faster I spin again
when I see your face
my heart is burning,
spinning out of control
from just one look
from your sexy blue eyes
my heart is on overload

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4. Twisters in the heart

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  • penman gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.