Beneath the heavens
as we listened to music
I noticed your heart beat.
This melody so pleasant
my ears begged for more.
That is when I asked,
"Be forever mine?"
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Credit Artist:
http://demoncherry.deviantart.com/art/Signs-of-Destiny-75824501
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt 1 Hour Quickie (picture is up) by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 27, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautifully done dear and congrats on your gold well deserved
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so sweet
best of luck
Tasha
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Aww.. the heartbeat the melody.. that is just lovely and so romantic! Thanks
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Beautiful
This is so beautiful, you have a wonderful imagination
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Kids
You sappy silly girl you... this was great... now if only you showed this tender side more often, and to real boys!!!! *wink wink*
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