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When The Ocean Meets The Sea

Blankets dancing,
sheets and windows curling.
I need only to look in your eyes
to see myself fallen.
The way i used to be.
Your kiss sends me
a harpoon straight through my scaled lips.
Such passion.
Your love tenderizes.

my eyes closed

only for a moment,

more like an hour it felt.

I saw colors of bright tempos

and sang like a green Irish sunrise.

Rich and soothing.

 

You holding my hand for the first time.

Open my eyes to see you like it was the last.

Oh gentle noises soft and pretty

dripped from your tounge.

I only hope to catch it with lips.

 

Yes.

We have been friends for too long.

Two unlikely shipmates falling for eachother

like when the ocean meets the sea 

tonight we sail to untested waters.

I can't stand you not here without me

It's so unnatural.

We should alter our hearts

picture them motionless.

Thats how I feel towards you.

I'm ready to prove it.

 

We set aside our personal belongings

clothes and wallets alike.

Let them sit on top of eachother.

A warm glow sillouettes from the curtained window.

Our lovers' light is burning for you and me.

My nerves are alost drunk

I feel nervous tonight.

Still,

I lay my hands sweaty chalk outline

Your every open measure

gently soothing.

Every calming note you hum

only make my hands more nervous.

 

You face me.

Look deep in my eyes

deeper then anyone dared to look.

You see something in me you hold on to,

I can almost tell you love me.

We spend most of the night kissing

stroking and petting sensations

we love to burn and lay idle.

I climb on top and behold your landscapes.

The kind only a bird wishes they could see

with eyes like mine.

Your chest are the mountains

stomach is the ocean

belly are trails.

Your hair is the gardens

eyes are the sun.

 

I almost feel like I'm about to release

but your fingers reassure me

as I enter inside you

I go even deeper.

Your arms and legs wrapped around me

I can almost smell your warm and sweet liquids

reaching out.

while inside you

I sail back and forth in waters

alternating calm and fierce.

 

We scream together

kiss almost forever.

You reach and dig your fingerprints on my back

grasping tighter,

tighter.

You're almost there,

I can feel it.

You want it.

I need it.

We both do.

 

I can almost feel me pulsating.

You start singing

I start screaming.

So much,

we almost break the sound barrier.

(And the bed.)

As your orgasms coming closer and closer

we try to go faster

a head on collision.

But we tease ourselves to make it last.

We're so starving for it.

Hungry for the love we make.

Without warning

you shut your eyes and sing

I clench my hips and muscles so tight I almost go numb.

We climax at the same time.

 

Weary.

Drenched.

Drunk on our own love,

we collapse together

But I can't escape this overwhelming

gap I feel now.

The only reason is that you sleep as if in heaven.

While I lay awake

missing you.

 

 

 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 10

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    Oh wow John, you certainly know how to heat up a room and make the monitor all steamy!  Deliciously satisfying!

    Congratulations on the Gold & Silver this won


    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda

  • It was good. It didn't WOW me though. I feel it was your standard erotic poem. I didn't find anything special about it. It was good though! Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~

  • Whoa. I think I just lost my breath. This poem was perfect. Sensual, erotic, had amazing imagery, and definitely did a good job at making me drool. It was beautiful, and had such class, but yet it was sexual, and had great climax!

    "Your arms and legs wrapped around me
    I can almost smell your warm and sweet liquids
    reaching out."
    Mmm Mmm Mmm! Excellent Write!
    Great job and Good luck in this contest.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 12

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    Wow this was so beautiful.
    So much emotions within & sensual
    portrayls. Lovely thoughts & breath-taking write.

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck

  • longshot
    September 6, 2008
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    Damn!


  • Wulf-Eyez De Winter gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    this is so beautiful...the perfect form of love making...truly beautiful

  • cheerios4444
    August 24, 2008
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    Beautifully written I enjoyed reading your poem


  • Rianna Bear
    July 19, 2008

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    gah gah gah...

    lol

    this was so great! filled w/the emotions of love and passions strait from ecstasy delights!! i loved the comparisons between each action and nature...brilliant!

    bring it on, cabana boy! trying to 1 up me! ba-ring it!!

    ♥rianna


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    Wow!
    very raunchy and passionate to say the least. I loved your irish sunrise so green and welcoming. I like how your roots shine through.

    The poem it's self is excelllent no! (Brilliant) to use the sea as a metaphor for such a strong subject was just perfect. The imagery you conveyed is vivid, i had to stop and cough lol.

    Lovely work. i liked it.
    Slán agus grá

    P.S I think i will give you 10/10 for your gaelic lessons.
    Dolores x


  • LunaAmara
    May 28, 2008

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    this is really descriptive! i love it!
    the imagery really takes me to that moment

    keep up the good work

    ~amy


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Whoah! Now this was a bit of a diversion for me! Amazing passion and lust...a volitile combination I must say! Very sensual and pleasing...enjoyed this so much.

    Az


  • michellemybelle gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    OMG!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!! HOT HOT HOT! This rocks my world, thank you precious!!! Great metaphors, full of emotions, imagery, passion and well, everything a perfect erotic poem needs.

    sighs...



    (you get a kiss of this one!)

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