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Everlasting

Inside my heart is a love so pure that it hurts with every heartbeat.
within your eyes is a love so true that it brings me to my knees,
deep inside my soul, is a truth thats tells we will be forever more in love,
encased in your dreams ,are images of our life as we grow old.
An emotion so strong it melts the heart and snuffs out all around it
a feeling so unique that it drowns out all it sees
a urgency that screams for a touch from it's angel
a beauty so hidden it yearns to just be seen
An emerald glow of shining stars stare at your reflection
as a hazel sheen of all within, gazes at my soul
All we are, all that was, hidden in a word
all we see, all we know, left behind so many torn
all we feel, all thats true, is a love everlasting
and everlasting love, between me and you

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 2

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    Really good write it. I like the flow. Good Luck in the contest

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    May 28, 2008
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    I like the background color. Good luck in my contest.