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Silent Insanity

Wild eyes
widening with each
intended strike of torture

Is that a hint of enjoyment
displayed upon
your spirited face?
a pretense of pleasure?

Fingers curling around
the table where you lay
bound, chained

Everything invisible
except the stitches
that outline the shadow
of your struggling body

Completely still
listening to the sounds
of the world surrounding you

Uncontrollable outbreaks
of silent insanity
hidden under the skin
that stretches over the bones

Stained bandages
wrapped tight
around your wrists

Unspoken secrets
actions automatic
scratching away
at the flesh

Mirror reflection
guilt stricken lips
unable to speak the truth

Play hide-n-seek
with the ever taunting lies
sanity deteriorating
how long until you're fully taken?

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  • completely mad
    June 15, 2008
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    this was just what I was looking for...thanks so much for entering this..


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    June 13, 2008

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    OH MY!

    THIS IS BRILLIANT!
    It sent shivers down my spine and made me smile....
    *grins*
    AMAZING!!!!!!! kudos on this outstanding write,
    this is insanity at it's BEST!


  • fakeport
    June 6, 2008

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    I like it. A good take on insanity.
    "Unspoken secrets
    actions automatic
    scratching away
    at the flesh" - I love that stanza, very powerful.

    Thanks a lot for your entry.