Wild eyes
widening with each
intended strike of torture
Is that a hint of enjoyment
displayed upon
your spirited face?
a pretense of pleasure?
Fingers curling around
the table where you lay
bound, chained
Everything invisible
except the stitches
that outline the shadow
of your struggling body
Completely still
listening to the sounds
of the world surrounding you
Uncontrollable outbreaks
of silent insanity
hidden under the skin
that stretches over the bones
Stained bandages
wrapped tight
around your wrists
Unspoken secrets
actions automatic
scratching away
at the flesh
Mirror reflection
guilt stricken lips
unable to speak the truth
Play hide-n-seek
with the ever taunting lies
sanity deteriorating
how long until you're fully taken?
Author notes
letter I
A contest entry
- Alphabet Options by fakeport.
1000 points, ended June 12, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - thorugh the eyes of madness by completely mad.
600 points, ended July 2, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was just what I was looking for...thanks so much for entering this..
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OH MY!
THIS IS BRILLIANT!
It sent shivers down my spine and made me smile....
*grins*
AMAZING!!!!!!! kudos on this outstanding write,
this is insanity at it's BEST!

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haha thank you very much :]
i try
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I like it. A good take on insanity.
"Unspoken secrets
actions automatic
scratching away
at the flesh" - I love that stanza, very powerful.
Thanks a lot for your entry.




