Did you hear bout her,
Whispered across the room
little hussy got our man
bedded him in her bossom
Blackened his soul with taint, poisen
His life beaten from him
As she moved, played, teased
His broken will.
Did you hear about her
Stealing the life from them
The dark man in the corner
whispered, gossiped
About the woman, who bedded the man
Author notes
Picture prompt: http://imagecache2.allposters.com/images/pic/AMA/Gossip-web~Gossip-Posters.jpg by G. Witherspoon.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired. by Naridill.
700 points, ended June 2, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What you think?
Comments
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This was definately an amazing piece. Best of luck in the contest you entered
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This is a good poem. And it totally captures the spirit of gossip. All the whispers and talk, and how it takes on a character of it's own.
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definitely different but great to broaden my horizons. I think you did a wonderful job.
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