What’s love got to do with it?
Hard to say. . .
Hope my sarcasm doesn't get in the way!
Love is that shooting star
Bouncing inside my heart
Love is that pain
That will never fade away
Love is. . .
A psychos’ mistake!!!
Love only hurts
Everyone it can reach!
Love finds you the one. . .
That will break your heart!!!
Oh I can't wait
To make that mistake!
Love can be given
But not received!
Love is a package
Not shipped to me!
Doesn’t matter anyway
I would have thrown it away!
Why wouldn't I want to fall in love?
Hard to say. . .
Maybe because I'm not that insane!
Author notes
ZzBrokenHopezZ ~ Julie K.
A contest entry
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300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 18 entries
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STUNNING
Wow! This was brilliantly written. I could really relate to this. You put and reflected your feelings exceptionally well into poetry and the title is just perfect for the concept of this. I completely agree and feel your message in here. 'Love is. . .
A psychos’ mistake!!!' - these lines hit the nail on the head, hard. Terrific composition, I loved it!
~Emily~ xx
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Ah but it's sweet insanity. When I fall, I fall hard and when it's over, I don't regret a thing....except maybe not leaving sooner.
What's wrong with a little insanity, anyways?
Great write!
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This was effng awesome.
I liked the pinging back && forth about the emotions.
it made me uber happy on the inside
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lol kind of true i guess I have felt that way at one point then i found the one i was meant to be with and i just new and now im glad i had fallen in love
Mortikie -
yeah, this is a true piece. I think most people feel like this at some point.
a good write that reads well and flows nicely.
well done.
huggles
linzi =D -
Cute but True
I enjoyed it. It is cute and it can be oh so true. Great write and an enjoyable read.
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lol jules you forgot my quote spedly but username work.....
THAT IS AWESOME lol I love the insanity = love and love = a mistake factors and isn't it so flippin true!
Great write, the indecisive aspect of it all, how in the third verse, oh i can't wait, to make that mistake, lol then how you used it in objective forms, as if a package, summing everything up with my favorite verse.
Why wouldn't I want to fall in love?
Hard to say. . .
Maybe because I'm not that insane!
~Katie!! Thanks for the entry!!
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