You are with me in everything I do,
You haunt my dreams while I am awake.
I feel you on my tears, though my face is clear,
I feel you on my soul, though my body is dead.
A contest entry
- >>Inlove & Alone by Lislaine.
457 points, ended June 5, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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WAW very deep words!! loved it!! can you do it a little bit longer? if not, let it like this.
thx for entering my contest. hope you had fun and GOOD LUCK
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