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That Kind Of Light -Gold

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Woman bending over cleft in oceans grimace;
reading stones like Braille, from a distance

a sudden white belly lifts and arches

how could she then, sail like leaden angel,
with weighted memory of everything as dark

that kind of light

II.

bending back the folded edges
of an old journal, ready for cremation,
she wakens to the stippled black facts
that she had had reason to sorrow
over heavy shrouds of misconstrued understandings
that left her, nonetheless, free,
to make better choices; and in that heavy script
she pushes back heavy wrappings
and begins to awaken to fate’s fine fully-lit face

that kind of light

III.

a daughter’s note from inside her shell
of treatment’s cocoon:

“I get it, Mom…what you warned me about…
and loved me in spite of not being quick about…”

that kind of light

IV.

Oh, let it come like melted butter seeps
over lemon yellow corn
fresh from its roil and boil;
that which adds flavor and savor
to something that was once held by heartache,
guilt, sorrow but becomes sweet from the inside out
or the outside in, or a hover or indecision

that kind of light


Author notes

prompt - about battling darkness, how to overcome these obstacles...whatever ways you want to write it or whatever methods you think are best for finding hope and light.

Luzde-Ora-RC Gordon

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  • PageTurner
    May 28, 2008

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    That kind of light...


    YOU!!!!


    Shine On, m'Lady!

    ~ Nicky&heart;


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      June 6, 2008
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      aw, ty dear friend. Life is buttr on hot popcorn awesome jsut now....packing now so I don't forget anything... can not wait to meet newly found brother.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    i have never battled darkness carol , if i have to you can teach me much , xxx peter


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      June 6, 2008
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      bless your heart......there are many beacons...make sure you knwo what coast it is on.


  • Malabu
    May 27, 2008

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    Damn woman...this took me from sorrows turn to and uplift of spirited yearn...leaving me hungry for the succulant corn...you spew words like a river rampant...flowing over my stones ever so gentle...

    and I love the feel of it all
    Mal


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      June 6, 2008
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      Mal, what a dear nurturing poet you are. AP would not be the same for me without you!

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