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Babe...

Babe you know I love you,
Every minute I think of you,
Babe you know I'd die,
If I ever made you cry.

Babe I know I hurt you,
When I had to desert you,
Babe now you know I'm here,
So you have nothing left to fear.

Babe I'm here without you,
Thinking all about you,
Babe you know I miss your smile,
When we part for a long while.

Babe you konw I need you,
Ill always be here to feed you,
Babe you know you're my life,
Glad I didn't make her my wife.

So biches please back off,
You fellas go jack off,
I am here for fucking good,
So fuck yourself,
You know you should!


(I am god, get on your knees and praise me!!!!)

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  • HiddenWolf
    December 27, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful write, It's interesting and the last line finishes it all I love it great write . keep up the good work

  • princessrevenge17
    June 23, 2008
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    LOL! good poem
    it was hilarious!
    xoxox Zoe <3

  • ClaustrophobicJoy
    June 18, 2008
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    I loved the last stanza! It was absolutely hilarious! Great write!
    ~Kayne


  • SarahInAHalfShell
    May 31, 2008

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    Raph spells everything wrong ,Ebony...hehe, this was cute baby I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • xRazorBladeRomancex
    May 29, 2008
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    really good!!!! i like the emotions you put into it and just the way you said was funny

  • ebony-blood
    May 27, 2008

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    "So biches please back off,
    You fellas go jack off,
    I am here for fucking good,
    So fuck yourself,
    You know you should!" bahaha that fucking halarious!! oh and you spelled a couple words wrong over there...thought you should know...
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