Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Gentle Words

Not a sound have I heard
Of your voice upon my ear.
Eye to eye, no contact
Yet such feelings of closeness
Though far apart we may be.

You have touched me deeply.
More than I ever
thought you could.

For your gentle words caress
the recesses in my heart
Touching where no one sees.

In what way can I thank you?
For what you've given so freely.
Your honesty and trust
Sharing life's ordeals.

It's something
I'll always treasure
Your gift to me, from you.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    And what about my panties you still have in your pocket? You DO still have them don't you? I don't give the pretty lacey red ones up for just anybody ya know? This is sweet Rob and I truly and totally understand what you are saying here. I too have been touched, blessed and felt warmed over again and again by many of the contacts I have made here and some days, this is a better place to be than surrounded by actual body counts, ya know what I mean? I enjoyed this piece. Best wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thank you for sharing. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der


    • faderman1959
      June 12, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks kimberly! This is an amazing and wonderful place! I have met so many wonderful people here! I'm glad you understood what I was saying in this as I really treasure your friendship! Red panties? Well of course I do! My mama didn't raise no fool! Well not most of the time anyway!


  • SexyAngel0418
    June 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    wow... another awesome poem!!! Great job!!! I really enjoy reading your wide range of poetic talents!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


    • faderman1959
      June 11, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      I'm amazed at all the wonderful people I have met on here! They are all so nice, just like you~!!!!!!!!!!