I'm still raw from the scalpels charm
Its catching on my conscience, creeping up my arm
Vows never again, imperiously cursed
The blood dancing in the bathtub, I'm almost submerged
My eyelids are weary, my veins are tired
The time is right, for I am inspired
Thought I would've stopped long ago
But its seeping through my blazer, starting to show
A palette of emotions running astray
How to learn the colour wheel in a messed up way.
A contest entry
- I'm depressed, your depressed, write me something by Burnt-Angel.
300 points, ended June 17, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The emo cliches... by AutumnsFlame.
1416 points, ended July 23, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW I really did like this! You made me feel what was going on and you used some excellent imagery. I say, good job to you! The flow and rhyme were right on! Thank you for entering my contest.
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I can really visualise this piece, it was like seeing a movie I have lived but with better seats and lighting. I love this, I really feel emotionally close to this. You really have a beautiful talent, the way you word your poems is definitely unique and I love it well done (and by the way I commented on this twice because I didn't feel I had really read this proper lol not because I forgot I had haha)
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its amazing
holy fuck i love this its so powerful and commanding
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Your expressions are very powerful, you have used a lot of words which are not very often used and it works well in this. you obviously have a wide knowledge of words
i'm jelous 
very well written, this is a moving piece. thank you
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