Thick valleys
of beauty surround my body,
and it makes me happy
to know that he is loving
every inch and lump,
shape and character.
The sweetness
that rests upon my pale skin
is inhaled by his heavy breathing
as we sway together,
in motion,
our beautiful naked bodies exposed
by the heat of our passions;
in love.
In a list
A contest entry
- Redefining. by Number 13.
600 points, ended June 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely! ♥
Thanks for entering
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Very nice take on the prompt...BIG girls need love, too and some of my best lovers were voluptuously sexy...
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Thanks! So true
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Makes a lot of sense after seeing the prompt Amber
...Well written! All the best!
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beautiful poem my favorite lines are
"The sweetness
that rests upon my pale skin
is inhaled by his heavy breathing"
tho the word "lump" for me personally isn't very sensual
but besides that i really like your poem
keep writing
Kas K Bubbles
Peace in Chaos out
a balance of both -
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Oh thank you for the honest comment - did you happen to notice the prompt?? *smile* Might make a little more sense, then again, maybe I should post the picture... Teehee - AmBeR
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oh okay it makes more sense now
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very sensual. good write. i could feel the heat.
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