between the cracks in the sidewalk
a single flower grows
so insulting to the concrete
it's defiant beauty shows
that in love's finest hour
it just can not be denied
and it will find the power
grow through the cracks of pride
this single flower growing
in the face of a concrete world
a love, that's so worth knowing
it makes concrete come unfurled
just like a concrete flower
we've the strength to break through
it's time, let love devour
the pridewalk inside you
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yeh it's sappy a lil bit ..but after reading it again .. i like it
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lol omg..I only stopped by to look at the prettyful pic..and I read it to jj...and omfg..I THINK MAYBE I GET IT NOW...lol...you rock.....
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This is so beautiful.
Flawless rhyme and flow but most of all,
The message here touched my heart..
Lynda
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i like youre writes too
thank you for the read
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hey tis just me, im just spendin some time looking at some of my faves stuff today
still love this one, you should do these kind more often
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Well, that was pretty much amazinggg.
Abi
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Just when I thought it couldn't get better then your poem Murdered by, I read this amazing and truly inspiring poem. There are many reasons why this poem sings to my soul- After reading Murdered by, it is nice to know that within it all flowers still bloom.
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wow thanks
for the reads ... when im done skyping .. lol ill read more of your wonderful stuff
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This is simply one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. It is an outstandingly amazing piece of work! How I did not find your poetry earlier I am amazed! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. And this beholder absolutely loves your work! Keep it up!
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oh, i dig this sappy little treasure...love the flow...made me feel defiantly happy after reading this...there is joy in this...tactile joy...beautiful work...you make me smile
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wow, this is different for you is it not?
I like it, its sort of summery, and tender, and well, just nice and warm and happyfull.
If your interested in technicallity, it has a really nice tight rhythm too, so it clog dances of the tongue, mmm maybe an irish dance, cos its a bit too pretty for a clog dance
Tis a very fine write, lol, as all yours are, but today of all days this hits the spot
Thankyou
T
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yeh i knew you would notice that
lol others would have totaly missed that .. but you called it ... it was just the pic .. it kind of inspered me ..lol
'im not completely happy with this write .. but my worst critic and all....
so thanks for commenting.. .again
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Soft, sappy, cute... but I like it
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Well I loved it...sappy,mushy whatever you want to call it I think it's sweet!
"this single flower growing
in the face of a concrete world
a love, that's so worth knowing
it makes concrete come unfurled"
Love that is so special it can break through any cold heart! That's what I got from this...hope where there seems none!
Pure!!
darlintlc
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sappy is good..lol this is such an encouragement...a refreshment of beauty...silent defiance, without permission or qualm...being in a space in the time puzzle that doesn't fit....but does...lol sorry...love this...like a hand on a shoulder...or a hug.lol
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theres nothing wrong with sappy lol...its beautiful
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i think that pridewalk is fine, i really like the details you have put into this poem, its cute, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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