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unbroken heart.......

my heart is not broken....
but simply not complete...
not blood is shed...
but a single tear....
my passion grows for something real....
but i cannot find what my heart longs for....
i dream of so many things...
mostly hate consumes me.....
but when i think of you i feel at peace, ads a whole, complete....
this may or may not be love....
but maybe a beautiful friendship.....

Author notes

i wrote this a long time ago for a dear guy friend to me...... he no longer is hear but will always be in my heart.....

all i ask is to be honest......

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  • tokiohotel
    May 27, 2008

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    this is a really good poem. I liked it. Even though it is short you still got alot of emotion into it. Comment on one of my poems?

    • Raven Rose
      May 28, 2008
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      lol.... well thank you...... i appreciate your comment lol.... ok i will check it out lol...


  • HollowAngel
    May 27, 2008
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    I like the poem its nice but I cant read it, its all black.