Is belief as to an empty hole?
Should I not be in charge of my soul?
What makes them better then such as I?
Is it that I won't yet they still try?
Shall I believe that in the sky an all knowing father watches us die
and that we must plead for our salvation before we pass beyond redemption
to sing and chant and give and tell or pay and burn within this hell
To your God of mercy God of murder God of love and God of torture!?
Questions which I guess have an unknowing answer,
of logic of thought of mind over matter,
must I still plead to know what is real?
Did I buy them with time or must I give what I steal?
An idea of heaven to always give praise and be as one with all of God's slaves
You say free choice but can there be when you obey a God for eternity?
Must I point out perfections flaws must I show all the holes within your God's laws?
Must I be the devils voice in a world of angels that have no choice?!
Still no answer seeks to guide me
Alone without your worthless deity
You force your religion with an iron rod
Beat them in the name of God
No more threats of condemned endings from a creature with no beginning
No more ignorance based on feelings no more begging, pleading, praying
I refuse to join your corrupted throng for I know in my heart that it's all wrong
So pray for your soul and I'll pray for mine and we'll discover the answer in all due time...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Your write is strong
in your own convictions yet I understand,
that Christians can be very hard on the world, that was not Gods plan, I can’t speak for all cause I have my own cross to, bare I have turned away from self righteous Christians that look down on you and think they are better,
Its my choice to love a God who’s loved me first faults and all, and my Choice to not prove who I am in Him either, I am the least of the least that would Judge for God say’s love your fellow man,
and I do its like in anything if you love some one you try to please, I love my God, and He loves me even when I didn’t love my self first. But I know
I don’t walk the line or the narrow road, I sin every day and in my Heart we were born with convictions knowing right from wrong, and still go against the grain, and in your quest a case for Christ, there are too many people that don’t show that example of love. This is your life and how you live it, and I hope one day you will find the answers, I am still seeking mine I just wanted to say I understand.
Blessings to you
Rend


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SUPERSPECIALAWESOME!!!!
I always love your poems. They're all amazing. I really like this one, since your writing about religion. Im still confused on what the believe in.

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this is so sad,
we all grow sooner or later and at our own pace.
very creative write.
God bless...





