Randomness
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A thousands of faces that seem a bit wrong,
Another million to come on this road that's long,
For all that ever meant anything is now gone,
For them it never meant anything all along.
Streets seem to be dry, each face filled with some lies,
And I'm just passing by, goin' on hearing those cries.
No aim, no thoughts, the world's jus' carrying it on,
Seeing themselves in mobs, not knowing they're all alone.
Those trivial talks, and trig walks,
Noway ! No , no , I'm not fascinated by these,
So much to do in this short span of time,
Don't wanna slip it away, don't wanna let it on grease.
What did you realize in living life thorugh ?
You never thought, but now you do,
Was this the way, you'd go away,
On a hapless day to see you dead in the grave ?
Having those skills, could have been be able to fly,
You never got through it, you never put it to try.
And all these years, as the time flew by,
Lost in those laughs, waited till it all dried.
Each every new personality,
In these masses loses identity,
So much for the known diverisity,
and its all gone .......
Restricted are your views, though you may have had
All times that made you gay and sad,
You're still in what's this good and bad,
Is this why were you born ?
Hey I am 17 and this is my first poem, how do you find it ?
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"A thousands of faces that seem a bit wrong,
Another million to come on this road that's long,
For all that ever meant anything is now gone,
For them it never meant anything all along."
I absolutely loved these lines.
And i'll love to see the use of some similes and metaphors in your future poems.
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
This was so good, I loved it! You did an awesome job on this, especially for your first poem. Keep it up!!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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For your first poem I have to say that you did a brilliant job. Keep up the good work..you will continue to get better with time...but I have to agree with this being an emotional write...Once again good job.
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wow this is awesome. i like the ryming and the way the words flow togther. for a firdt poem this is really good. id be interested to see what else u could come up with so keep up the good work. ~ brook
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Very interesting write.... I hear drums behind it all..... interesting indeed.
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wow
this is a very emotional write...I liked it alot..its very deep and full of emotion...you have a great talent...keep writing
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