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Living in America

Wars for nothing.
Corrupt politicians.
Dirty money.
Poor decisions.
Society Sucks.
We ran out of luck.
In 2008 our lives are f**ked.

A contest entry

I would appreciate feedback regardless of what it is im just looking to improve my poetry

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Well life is bad not only here in America but it is everywhere also so many struggle today in this society thanks for sharing much luck

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    I find this simple and well spoken. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian