The truth escapes in deadly manner
A slow pursuit of the illusion
Chase of the unexpected
Entwined, a lethal fusion
As girl collides on infectious ground
And life be unveiled before her
Reality claims its possessions
Truth set on living murder
As she con-caves upon herself
Life with purpose at end
Hate for all she ever was
Dark, as cruel as death
Cannot deny that notion within
Cannot refuse her conscious
Stained blood adorns every sheet
Devastating site one could witness
As the blade in her hand
Gets the last say
One, last simple incision
And the pain shall fade away
Author notes
SECOND OPTION 'UNLEASHED' BY GIRLTRIPPED
A contest entry
- PIF...semi quickie...picture inspired DARK....... by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
500 points, ended May 28, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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absolutely beautiful. I loved the power that was behind this. Very strongly and greatly worded. I struggle th same battle and i can relate. Just awesome job.
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WOW.
this is absolutly amazing!!
not much else i can say!
well done and all the best for the contest -
Great poem, some wonderful imagery within your words. Good luck in the contest
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sure and thanx ^.^
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well this is great ash! lovin it. message me wat its about though?
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se I get the feeling you already know... just all this crap 4m school!!!
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Can you pop which picture you used as your inspiration in your author notes please
I get the feeling it is the second one
either way I really loved how dark & deep you went with this and I find it amazing seeing your 14 , your imagination is so alive in this and I really enjoyed reading it
Thank you and good luck
Cindy
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