I'll be your rose, your silver bud
my liquid petals will be your blood
my stem of green your crutch of life
I will stay your darkness your demon's night
My liquid petals will be your blood
from fear you will no longer run
I will stay your darkness, your demon's night
For I protect your sun of bright
From fear you will no longer run
my stem of green your crutch of light
for I protect your sun of bright
I am your rose, your silver bud
Author notes
This is another form of poetry thought I can't remember what's its called. There point of the form is the specific repitition of certain lines.
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Beautiful poem, I like the repeating of the lines and the deeper explanation after it. I love it.
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This is a good form and a beautiful poem. It kinda reminds me of a dream. You should telll me when you figure out the form. I really like these lines:
My liquid petals will be your blood
I'll be your rose your silver blood
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oo, i like this one
Exalent flow and imagnative beyond measure! always liked the paramedics of life.
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