cool, crisp
brisk air
snowflakes fall
Author notes
season: winter
A contest entry
- Form Contest: Haiku - Nature - Personification by Little Eagle.
300 points, ended June 26, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your best GOLD winning Poem by Aussie Gypsy.
400 points, ends December 9, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Comments
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this is beautiful!
though, i see that it has already won a competition.
(i am trying to only incorporate previously un-placed poetry)
none the less, great work.
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Thanks to all for the kind and encouraging words
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the Haiku soft, simple, direct and descriptive.
Cyber Artist
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me likes
I like it, simple, and to the point.
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Imagery abounds in a minimum of words!
Well Done and best of luck in the contest!
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I really, really, liked this wonderful piece. I can easily see why it won a golden cup. Thank you for posting it.
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Thank you for your entry
Ahh the Brevity of this, goes so well with the words you have used for Winter. cool, crips, brisk that coupled with the brevity of the words really personifies the theme of Winter. Good use of the prompt
Good job on the form. With a 2-2-3 sylable count I think yours is the shortest Haiku in the contest.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
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a month from now...this might be what im thinking...when it's too hot...
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Ooh I got a chill, just the thought of winter. Nicely done, my best wishes in the contest.
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Ohhh I felt like I was walking in the snow them, breathing in the crisp and fresh air...
Lovely
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for some reason I have never been able to do these..lol.
But you did a wonderful job!!
Best of luck hun..
Angel
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