Goodbye

Goodbye

To the old
to people I knew so well
and leaving them forever.

Goodbye.

To the young
to my self long ago,
playing games and having fun.

Goodbye.

To the child
that I used to be
quiet and sometimes wild.

Goodbye...

Hello.

to the adult world.
confusing and harsh
all together in this new world.

hello

To growing up.

Author notes

hmm well this is how im feeling at the moment, i dont want to grow up but its happening whether i like it or not and has been for years i just dont like it.

tell me what you think i need critige

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By me, right now

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Darkened Seraph
September 30, 2008

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i thought i had commented on all your poems, turns out i haven't many sorrys and s for the latness to this comment lol.

This is a really good poem on how it feels to move from childhood to adulthood, i remember saying goodbye to the things i used to do for example games of it, running around a playground look at us now. I actually love the idea of growing up because it allows me to follow my dreams, besides its not that bad growing up, at first i hated it, it destroyed a long term relationship i had going, but look where its taken me, and look where it has taken you. life gets harder but there are more rewards with adulthood. keep writings carre as I will eventually read them lol
Daggerlove
August 19, 2008

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excellent... It's like you reach in and pulled out my feelings and put them on paper.
Your a true poet!!! Love you
Poco Loco
June 1, 2008

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hmmmm....iget the same feeling some days..and the next day im so hyper that all thoughts of growing up go out my head! Lol. *big hugs* No matter if you grow up, your still the same person and we all love you. Fantastic write with great flow and the emphasis. Keep writting as your getting better every write!
xxx
xxxbunnyxxx
May 29, 2008
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this poem is sooo good
i love it!!