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I’m sorry.




I am sorry I cant fly
because if I could, I’d be there
in a split second, so you won’t
have to be all alone.

God. I’m sorry.

Sorry that I didn’t know,
that I cannot call- sorry that
life would be broken now;

& I am sorry
that I won’t be able to fix it
back to the way before.

Forgive me, my friend.

I could cry, except
I can’t because I have been
through the same nightmare.

I could call you, except
there won’t be enough words
to say what’s in my heart.

take it as it is, my friend.
I am sorry, sorry for everything.

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sorry i cant be there, I'd give anything and everything to be there now.

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  • I really like this. It's very raw. Leaves me wondering what the situation was. But I like the mystery in this piece.

    Amazing write.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    May 28, 2008

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    AWW!

    Charu, i had no clue what this was all about until you told me the whole story! i'm really sorry bout what happened... i know it doesnt directly affect you, but seeing a dear friend in need and being unable to really help does affect you!

    I understand how it feels to be in this situation! been there, done that! But you know what, time will heal the scars in your heart dear friend! And keep holding on to faith, and pray that no other misfortune occurs in "her" life! well, atleast thats what i do! and you know that if you ever wanna talk, i'm right here for you kays! I love you lots!!!

    Gosh, i forget to talk about the poem, it was brilliant! amazing, and charu, don't feel sorry! i mean, yea, do feel sorry for what happened and all, but don't let yourself down! It's not your fault you can't fly there (impossible for humans to fly, you see) Take care buddy, and if you ever do get a chance to talk to her, tell her you'll be praying for her.. aight?

    Much nuch much lovies,
    Ranji


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    May 27, 2008

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    What a fantastic poignant poem. i'm not sure of the thing that's happened but this is a touching piece dedicated with much love, you're such a great person Great work xx