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Your Hidden Secret

Looking back now,
I detest everything about you.
Left me feeling like a clown,
Hoping all of this would end soon.

You left me in the dark.
Left me feeling like a child.
Left me behind, but left your mark.
Now you're living free and wild.

You said you loved me,
I was too stupid to doubt,
Then you left me,
For a reason I don't know about.

I look back now,
I see it was all a lie.
You may not like the sound of it,
But maybe your "love" should die.

Our "love" was a fake.
Little affection for me.
Too much love to make
with a man that was not me.

A mistake is what I made.
No time to think.
Your silent seduction made me obey.
You dishonor pushed me to my brink.

Now I say nevermore
I say goodbye
To an old paramour.
Have fun with you new guy.

Author notes

I wrote this thinking about one of my exs who was under my suspicion of cheating

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  • Kelly-2da-B
    May 27, 2008

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    awww! im sorry ur ex cheated on you.. beat ur ex up, jk.

    but this is a good write!!! i like the rhymes and how everything kind of flows. i love the deepness and the realness..

    GREAT JOB!