I'm waiting for a man who...
Can tuck me into bed at night.
Wakes up beside me in the morning and the first thing he does is smile at me.
Plays with my hair.
Doesn't have a problem saying "I love you" wherever we are.
Says his sorry when he's done wrong.
Helps with the housework.
Doesn't hide his tears.
Kisses me on the neck.
Hugs me from behind.
Doesn't mind cuddling on the couch.
Gives massages.
Calls me loving names.
Isn't afraid of me having male friends.
Doesn't know the meaning of jealousy.
Writes me love songs or letters.
Says I look more beautiful without make-up.
And....
Loves me for me.
A contest entry
- What Does Your Heart Desire? by Jeremy0826.
1800 points, ended June 3, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how about it guyz?
Comments
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This is really beautiful and something
that I think every woman can relate to.
It's a wonderful feeling when you find
someone that makes you feel this way
all of the time. I do hope that you
find someone like this for you. This
is a great poem and I thank you for
taking the time to write for this contest.
I appreciate your entry and wish you the
best of luck with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
who doesnt want a guy like this??? lol ha...this is great..and right now in my life i think i may of found this hehe thanks 4 the great read
xoxo-christina
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this is really beatiful I loved it. And I think that like the whole world wants that, sadly i dont think there are too many guys like that. T.T well ne way good write.
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