Your beauty,
less a measure of
hips and bust and
more a measure
of the heart.
Beauty shines
through your eyes,
in your depths and
brightens the room
with you.
Your beauty is
not contained,
it encompasses worlds
and touches everyone.
No one else
shines as bright.
A contest entry
- Redefining. by Number 13.
600 points, ended June 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. This is what every girl wants to be and wants to have written about her.
So... breath-taking.
I love the part about her beauty not being contained and "encompassing" worlds. Fascinating imagery.
Masterful.
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Nice write, love the imagery ♥
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A lovely piece penned within these lines. Though I feel it is a bit reserved, the emotions are still pure and beautiful. Great write!
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"Your beauty is
not contained,
it encompasses worlds
and touches everyone."
So true of inner beauty Beautiful poem
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Yes, this is what real beauty is - that light, that glow that shines from within. Loved the soft touch here and the depth of understanding of what true beauty really is. Lovely.
~ Nicolette
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