I remember my youthful days so long ago
When there was so much I did not know,
And the childhood game, so very sublime;
Show me yours, and I’ll show you mine~
Author notes
Short and sweet.
A contest entry
- It Is Time For Rhyme by Dalaney.
850 points, ended June 3, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Neat piece of fun!
Amazing how many people are too shy to admit to this innocent play...
But now, fast forward a few frames -
there is a great picture on "facebook" of two little kids dressed in sandals and underpants. The girl is pulling hers out in front of her so that the boy can peer in.
The caption has her saying "With this I'm going to control your LIFE!"
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This is halarious! I see you never did grow up did you?
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very short and sweet, despite the softness of it, it is a very good poem, inspirational, and i totally love it so much! the title drew me in.
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haha, this is funny..."show me yours, Ill show you mine"...I remember those days, when that statment wasnt full of hints of something bigger than the words, just pure innocence...I like this very much, good luck!!
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LMAO - I forgot about that part of youth
this is good - short & very sweet
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hahaha, you made me really laugh Michael. Love the rhyme.Oh for the games children play! Good luck in Dalaney's contest. Love Juls
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hehehe short and sweet..made me giggle..such a great write dad, hope you do well in the contest
Cin
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When did you stop? hee hee!
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Cute!! I remember those game as a child too hehe
This is adorable and beautifully rhymed!
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