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Longing for Light

Days flow fast like tide
My hope dries up in desert
Longing for true light.

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  • azure85 gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Days flow fast like tide
    My hope dries up in desert
    Longing for true light.

    This is a very interesting haiku, it gives the reader something to think about. Thank you so much.