Insightful eyes explore
beyond instinct of raptor
freedom's wings soar
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 10 words
Artist Credit:
http://rainbowlovemilk.deviantart.com/art/The-Eagle-19378332
(If only we had the vision of an eagle and it's instict to fly on freedom's wings) awaiting judging...
A contest entry
- 7 entries, 10 words #7 by notorious.
390 points, ended May 28, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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If only we could just soar and be free if even only for a moment!!! Beautifully done and again so deserving of the shiney!! Congrats...
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It makes me want to fly away, can i fly away? lol.
This is great, such few words, yet such beauty. xx
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Excellent flow an rhyme. The imagery is also pleasing....great poem
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Excellent!
A great flow and presence about this piece. So very well penned in so few words!
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Very nice...love the picture. And I can see how it could be worth 1,000 words. Concise and inspiring.
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simply splendid!
wonderful as usual.... I love your short poem style! -
You've capture what its all about. The freedom to soar! Beautiful take on the pic! Perfect!
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This is lovely so much belongs streaking into the sky on eagle wings. Love, friendship, someone special that share intimate moments over tea and conversation to touch hearts in passing seconds while life grants freedom of space (as the eagle soars on wings that gathers clouds around it).
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Fantastic take on the prompt. You have said so much in only a few words. Thanks for sharing this with us.
♥
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Yes! Sometimes I feel a free as a pigeon. A wily pigeon that avoids getting it's head bitten off by one of those hawks that fly over lower Manhattan to reduce the population of my species. Yes, the life of a hawk is reduced to some Looney Tunes antic around me! My fellow rats with wings must rise up against those bullies. How many times must we be pecked 40 or 50 times before... Oh... My bad. I'm sorry. LOL
Nice write. Luv ya. Write on. One.
Dez
(You are the queen of quickies and you work well with little...
...words)
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Oh for wings such as this to fly away and just be free...such a lovely write on a beautiful subject and creature. We have Eagles here now by the rivers and I adore watching them fish. Best of luck Sis!
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Look out where you're going!!! Whew, that was nearly a mid-air collision, and not the good kind...
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Excellent
10 words speak so much. Eagles are beautiful birds
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yes...
...I want to fly like an eagle, to the sea fly like an eagle let my spirit carry me...l.ol. (still love that song!) anyways I also love this piece! great job with the prompt, and good luck in the contest my friend!
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This is such a great take on the prompt and so beautiful for 10 words. Well done for this and all the best for the contest.
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Excellent
Very discriptive piece my dear!! Well chosen words to get the impact of such a magestic bird. Don
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Well I wish I would have read this BEFORE I entered. LOL!! can't resist this contests of phantasy's though so I probably still would have wrote for it.
anyhow, back to your piece. loved the second line, a string of four words that says so much! You pushed those ten words to their limit and came up with a real gem here. Best of luck in the contest Jacks!!
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Wow, a wonderful 10 words you have penned. If only we did have that sight and freedom...would be heaven. Good luck in the contest
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A beautiful ten words...to have the freedom to soar like an eagle...bliss!
All the best in the contest...Sue
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freedoms wings soar...love that sis, beautiful in ten words..Hope you do well in the contest
Cin
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Wonderful!Your words have such a wishful feeling of freedom in them!
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Fabulous! A beautiful picture painted in so few words. I love these contests with a tiny amount of words; it proves how very much we can actually say in so few. Well done, good luck in the contest.
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Brilliant Jacks! You are getting so very keen with these short word prompts hon, all the best!
Love and peace always,
mj.
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aww come on. This is great Jacks!!
This makes for beautiful inspiration! Following instincts to become free.
Freedom comes as a price to all ... if nature or humanity is not ready to pay, we become extinct.
Steve
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Beautiful ...love the soaring feeling this gives...All the best!
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Bravo!!!! you did a wonderful job!!!
I really liked this..
Best of luck sissy!
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'Raptor' LoL, I had to look up this word on trusty dictionary.com/!! It's a great word and perfectly suits the context.
"Beyond instinct of raptor"
Loved this line.
"Freedom's wings soar"
I like that the wings appear to belong to freedom...The lyrics to "I'm Like A Bird" by Nelly Furtado come to mind LoL...
Poem suits the picture, so kudos. Good luck. =]
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