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[ Lightning flash ]

Lightning flash
thunder roar
Turn to ash
Here comes the storm

Black skies
Black skies under which I sleep
Haunted with visions I can't deny
Restless I won't retreat

Oh, I’ve got to see

(chorus)
Black Thunder Heads roll on
And I'll chase them away
Into the blackened setting sun
till the definite twilight come

Destruction in their path
Come home mothers wrath
And speak no more.

(Spoken)
And as the light approaches
On the roads behind
Dawn is covered again
by deaths darkly skies


Lightning Flash
Thunder Soar
Turn to Ash
Here comes my storm

Violent shakes like a quake
that make my soul break
Disturb my peace
destroy my sound
and thus the clouds coming down

Path of destruction left in wake
In the town of Green
No mistake, my heart ache
Destruction by Natures Machine

The Black Vortex spins
Lightning strikes
Oh will it never end

(Chorus) RepeatX2

Spoken as fades

"Even though I walk
through the valley of the shadow of death,
I will fear no evil"

Author notes

I live in Kansas were if you hadn't notice we've been getting pounded by storm after sever storm of late. So I just decided to write about something that I'm familiar with.

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  • burdened
    July 10, 2008

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    Powerful and Beautiful

    This was amazing, I loved the imagery and the sheer power that the words exuded. Well written, and astounding. Keep writing.
    Burdened XxX


  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 28, 2008

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    woot!

    this is brilliant! i love the imagery in this... it was pretty dark, yet awesome! a well-written piece!

    keep penning!


  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    May 29, 2008
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    Amazing hun. I love the power of the imigiary you used. A very stron write.


  • aeroheadv1
    May 27, 2008
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    Nice.

    These storms are getting really damn annoying. Nice write, friend.