If i could
I would
Freeze that frame
That moment
I have it clearly
My mind won't forget
I would freeze that moment
The stars shone so brightly
The moon wasnt even up
Oh, that moment of peace
Everyone else were shadows
It was only you and me
So, if i could
That would be the momt i would freeze
To last eternity
Author notes
i tried. the contest wasnt very clear
A contest entry
- If I could... -closes after 15 entries by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 13 entries
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Special moments spent with those who are evn more special never seem to last near as long as we wish they would. That's why we need to cherish and nurture them when they come our way. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet for you possess a great gift that deserves to be shared, savored and feasted upon. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der
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