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Love Remains ...

Gone with winds,
Like petals in the air.
Engraved in souls,
Remains love.

Gone were the moments,
Moments to worth.
Deep inside were shadows,
Shadows of yesterday.


A song to be hummed,
Tuning to its best.
Spirit of love never dies.
Never give a chance to feel lonely


Forgiven was the fate
Nothing to hate
Journey we are in,
Never last long ...

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Nice write here

    Yes indeed in all our journies they often leave as fast as they come


  • earthstar
    May 27, 2008

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    Forgiven was the fate
    Nothing to hate
    Journey we are in,
    Never last long ...

    I love these lines they touched my heart. Given me comfort in my hour of need.

    Thank you


  • StarEyes
    May 27, 2008

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    Thanks for the entry into this contest! This tugs at the heartstrings. What a great job you did on it. I hope Brenda can find some comforting words in this piece.

    Best of luck to you in this contest!

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