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New Kind Of Love

 

Let me be that new kind of love
that no one seems to be able to get a hold of
More than just that "holding your hand"

or "calling me your man" type of love

Let it be known
I'll be there for you
When tears flow like rivers do
I'll be by your side
Does your soul ache?

Has your heart had time to mend?
If not, why don't you put you trust in me
Like you would your best friend

I would never betray you
I just want to take your pain away
Love you like you've never know
Make you smile like no one has ever seen

I want to change your world
And become the man of your dreams

 

 

Author notes

Background Credit: http://al-xx.deviantart.com/art/Burning-Heart-Rising-50193768

Position: Boyfriend
Username: Lowercase Prelude

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  • Papers
    August 14, 2008

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    I loved the way this was written! Upon looking at it, it looked like it was choppy, but when I read it, it flowed very well! Your love is spoken clearly and can be understood in every word. Great write!


  • offlimits
    July 29, 2008

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    beautiful

    thank you very much this was so beautiful, it has so much emotion and so much of how i feel
    good luck in the contest,

    and god bless
    cassie


  • movedon
    July 25, 2008

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    AW! Congratulations on the gold trophy. You have written of the type of man that EVERY girl wants. beautiful words here Chris. I really loved it!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    hoodwinked

    Awww how beautiful and deserving of a gold. So did you get tp be the boyfriend buecause if not, I'm single. You have been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit.

  • OurxBeginning
    June 24, 2008

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    Awh, how sweet is this. I enjoyed reading this one a lot, it was more than just holding hands, it was true care, and devotion. I like that. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • tortured-heart
    May 27, 2008
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    great write filled with emotion...keep up the great work!
    peace, love, & cheese


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 27, 2008

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    Awwwwww

    This is so sweet and romantic... And I just... Love it! Thank you so much for entering. This is the kind of entry I'm looking for in this contest. Thank you so much.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 27, 2008

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    This is totally romantic, out of the box, even, good luck with it in the contest and in other areas as well lol

  • whatami
    May 27, 2008
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    Captivate.
    Yeah.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Aww.. now who wouldn't be captivated by this!! True and lovely sentiments in this... sounds like you have a beautiful and big heart!


  • Mistress Masquerade
    May 26, 2008

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    Awwwwwwww, sweet times a gazillion. You practically hit the nail on the head for how my boyfriend makes me feel. Jeez, this is such a cute poem, it gave me the warm fuzzies. =)


  • Cannonsfire
    May 26, 2008
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    Now I can say the entire thing would make me say 'yes' Love, C


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    i'll just change the bg


  • Cannonsfire
    May 26, 2008

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    The bottom half is unreadable due to the black background! The start is just for sighing over

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