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The Pink Slip

The slip came in the mail today.
I thought you may have mailed a heart
For the pink shone through,
But the motionlessness
Worried me.
It is like a stillborn

Tired and
Tucked between the stills of white.
This is a death. This is a death.

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This is my third (?) draft

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  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    June 1, 2008

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    Wow. I once wrote about a "pink slip" (or rather, form) that was delivered, but never posted it, and I'm glad I didn't, because I would've been rather sheepish after reading this.

    Very profound. Very amazing.