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the day lingers on

Cool breeze in the leaves
A welcomed break from the heat
The day lingers on

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My day, one of many lately, spent from my bed looking out the window...

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  • azure85 gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Cool breeze in the leaves
    A welcomed break from the heat
    The day lingers on

    You have pulled the images from around you, and shown them the meaning that they give to your life. This makes and excellent contemplation, thank you so much.