Black hearts a symbol of hate
Of destruction and death
Evil, pain, hurt, and darkness
Surrounds the soul from all love
From all things and all emotions
Black hearts are a simple thing
Full of complex emotions and feelings
To enter is the hardest thing
You must break all barriers
And dig under the black and scars
While under the blackness
And all the scars and stitches
There is a heart that burns
With all the love that there was
It will love as never before
But to enter takes more
Time is just the beginning
Then respect, then like
And finally love appears
Although it may take years
While most are red and alive
Mine has become blacker than black
And was believed to never love
In the past, present, of future
But you have proved them wrong
You have gotten under it all
Blackness, scars, and stitches
Into the redness of the heart
And it has all dispersed
And you are all that remains
You have once again shown
Black hearts can love again
And this is the truth
I have never felt this way
And it is all for you
Heaven, while you are so far
I think this was meant
I have never loved, like now
This is almost perfect
Seeing you would complete
I would cry for you
I would lie for you
I would die for you
If there was ever any thing
I would do it for you
Why oh why is this
I feel so strange now
I enjoy this feeling
I know it is love
I have felt it, but not so grand
I love you and always will
Heaven I love you
That is all I can say
For those are my thoughts
And my feelings for all eternity
Author notes
"i love you and you have shown me that i can be loved and that i can love again" - Heaven
A contest entry
- Tell someone you love them... by Margaret Denham.
1900 points, ended August 23, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think you did wonderfully expressing your feelings and it is true that Love can reach all of us if we open ourselves to it.
Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.
Love Margaret
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hey there babe its heaven and i love you to you were there for me when i was done and i fell in love with you i know this felling but not as i love you babe i love you
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this is so beautiful swety
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well thats your opinion and you can keep it to yourself if thats how you feel and quit frankly I get plenty of attention SO KEEP YOUR NOSE OUT OF IT AND LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE!
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i'm sorry what i origanaly wrote hear was rude!
i was in a piss-poor mood
ur poem actualy not that bad
its tons better than some of other poems u have written
and i've talked to "Heven" so all good there
but i still find it funny that u turn to the internet cause no girl out here will give u n-e moer a-ten-tion
(how ever u spell the word)
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