A love stronger than what sister's share
An understanding stronger than old friends
A sharing stronger than lovers
That's us, until the end.
I look at them and I see myself
I see the pain we have all shared
Each problem broken into three
To show the others we care.
Each smile worn by three faces
Each tear divided between
For a friendship stronger than ours
Will never again be seen.
Each one of us stands to hold the other two strong
For we share the pain of life's heartache
United we will fight, we will face each fear
Together we may scream but together will never break.
The love that runs through our veins
Could never be destroyed or replaced
For together we are the truest of friends
Never forced, never faked.
Author notes
Prompt - The best mirror is an old friend.
--English Proverb--
Written for Kirsty and Tara!
To the contest holder,
I know it's more than ten lines but once I started it I couldn't stop, if you D'Q me I will understand but I just thought I'd enter it anyway so you could read it.
Great prompt by the way
TeenageTears x
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by SuicidalLover.
550 points, ended May 27, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From May 2008 by amaranthine lover.
900 points, ended July 1, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
is this okaay?...
Comments
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it's a nice idea to read about, but seriously, it was lacking in imagery and it just told me everything, nothing was illustrated, it has no sense of poetic justice to it, I'm sorry, but that's the way I feel.
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Yes, it is over the line limit, but does 3 mean something to you. I watch Charmed and yeah just curious. It is a lovely poem which deserves a trophy. Thank you for entering.
~Kystal Angel
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