scibbling your name
across the night sky
where the astroids fly
between the stars your name belongs
for your love my heart longs
Author notes
white crayon
20 words more or less
A contest entry
- Prompt 12 entries/ 20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended May 27, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The beauty of love...so soft and sweet...a pleasure to read and feel your heart felt words...thank you for sharing!
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this says it so well, lovely, a joy to read
Cindy
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Aww this is just lovely!! The bright stars at night sing of your love!
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Super sweet, like sugar minus cavities. Best of luck in the contest my friend. This is just adorable. I can't get over the word choice and flow, perfection.
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That's a sweet poem I enjoy reading it.
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awww this is cute
good job wifey
love you! -
this is beautiful. very nice.
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