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Do you Belive

These tears I cry
are no lie.
Do you believe it now,
that I'm dying inside.
Can't you see,
what you're doing to me.
I'm slowly dying.
Day by day,
another piece of me breaks away.
Nothing can cure me,
so don't even try.
I'm dying inside,
this is no lie.
Look around,
like what you see?
Because you don't see what I have seen.
You will never feel what I have felt.
So now I lay,
myself to sleep.
Crying inside,
can you see it now?

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  • Di Shirley
    January 27, 2009

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    Good work

    I felt your words. If my Love lost helps try reading Parting Lament. Guess we have all been there dear girl. Thank you Di