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Lucky Sneakers

At last the moments come
Making sure I am prepared
Washing thoroughly
No detail is spared

Comb my hair and shave
Splash on some cologne
Grab my lucky sneakers
And bring my cell phone

Now I think I’m ready
My laces are tied tight
I am so excited
As I step into the night

There’s no turning back now
As the journey has begun
For I’m running buck naked
How many people can I stun

The cool breeze blows around me
Urging me on with delight
My god streaking is such fun
I may run till broad daylight
 

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  • SexyAngel0418
    June 10, 2008

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    lol... this one is funny!!!! It reminds me of 'the streak' ... it is hilarious!!! Congrats on your HM!!!

    Hugs,
    beth


    • faderman1959
      June 11, 2008
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      I'm glad you got a laugh out of this! I had alot of fun writing it. Have never tried it though!


  • pattyann4500
    June 8, 2008
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    LOL Another priceless piece, Rob!!! I love it!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    You are such a nut! I would LOVE to see this. Planning on running through my neighborhood any time soon? Just let me know when and where and I'll bring my camera and binochulars. Lovely job hun. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Kathryn Bowden
    May 29, 2008
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    really cute! I enjoyed this, it made me smile!


  • Shancy Fayre
    May 28, 2008
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    LOL Cute visuals. Funny poem. Rhythm, just a tad too much to the left.


  • frownsnfreckles
    May 28, 2008

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    LOL I like this!
    gosh it's years since we had streakers here on football pitches orr half way through the cricket, or anywhere for that matter!!
    Life has definately got too serious and we need to lighten up, thanks for the smiles

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